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Caitriana NicNeacail's avatar

Beautifully written, and so bleak.. One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest meets chemogenetics! Great job.

L.L. Ford's avatar

Thank you for reading! Yeah, I actually had difficulty with this one because of the bleakness, but hey, sometimes writing makes us uncomfortable even as the writers - especially as the writer I think sometimes!

Kim Hardy's avatar

👏👏👏

L.L. Ford's avatar

Thank you!!!