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Aysun G. (She/Them)'s avatar

Strong intro here. I appreciate the economy of description here- too much exposition can really kill the flow in fantastic settings.

That last scene is easily the most evocative of this chapter. Bookended by the grounding description of Akashi in the city at the very beginning, it makes a nice intro that doesn’t rely on an action sequence to be eye-catching.

Excited to read the rest!

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Caitriana NicNeacail's avatar

Oh, soooo excited for this! Looking forward to following Akashi in this next adventure -- seeing how his relationship with Shara develops, whether he recovers from Monroe's machinations, and what happens with the Jewel of the Void!

Also, something that occurred to me - is he called Pacè because "pace" is "peace" in Italian??

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