Oh, what an ending! This has been an excellent story. I hope there's more, somewhere down the line - what happens next, does Akashi "wake up" from Providence's hypnotism, does Auntie Gee get them back together, what happens to Paradia in the end? So many things I look forward to reading about some day 🤩
And believe me when I say there are so many things that I cannot wait to share with you! Many of those questions will be answered... in due time, of course!
Fantastic finale L.L. I especially like the scene in the realm of the ancients. It felt perfectly otherworldly. And the ending was good and tense. I caught myself grasping at straws, trying to figure out a way Celie would come out on top over Monroe. I guess that's a sign it wrapped me up well.
Cant wait for the retrospective to hear what's coming next - the overall ark of Akashi/Celie across the stories has been well done.
I think part of what made Celie looking for an out come out so well is that even though I knew what had to happen, I was trying to find her a way out and I tried to rationalize multiple times how she could come out on top even though... well let's just say that wouldn't make sense in the story.
Oh, what an ending! This has been an excellent story. I hope there's more, somewhere down the line - what happens next, does Akashi "wake up" from Providence's hypnotism, does Auntie Gee get them back together, what happens to Paradia in the end? So many things I look forward to reading about some day 🤩
And believe me when I say there are so many things that I cannot wait to share with you! Many of those questions will be answered... in due time, of course!
Fantastic finale L.L. I especially like the scene in the realm of the ancients. It felt perfectly otherworldly. And the ending was good and tense. I caught myself grasping at straws, trying to figure out a way Celie would come out on top over Monroe. I guess that's a sign it wrapped me up well.
Cant wait for the retrospective to hear what's coming next - the overall ark of Akashi/Celie across the stories has been well done.
I'm so glad you enjoyed, thank you, Sam!
I think part of what made Celie looking for an out come out so well is that even though I knew what had to happen, I was trying to find her a way out and I tried to rationalize multiple times how she could come out on top even though... well let's just say that wouldn't make sense in the story.
Regardless, I can't wait to share what's next!