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The Chronicler's avatar

Stop it, this was amazing. I felt so uneasy the entire time! Is this a one shot?

L.L. Ford's avatar

Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I'm not sure if we're being honest! It was originally a one off idea, but it does have potential to be more... I suppose we'll see!

Caitriana NicNeacail's avatar

Phew, this is so creepy and so good!

L.L. Ford's avatar

Thanks so much!

Jon T's avatar

Creepy kids do it every time. This was great! 👁️

L.L. Ford's avatar

Thank you! I don't think I could be happy with how this and the creepy subconscious child turned out

Cole Noble's avatar

I really love the way you chose to weave in the doctor and nurse breaking through the dream and into the environment.

L.L. Ford's avatar

Thank you! That was actually one of the initial ideas that sparked the rest of the story, so I'm glad you enjoyed that aspect.