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Jan 15Liked by L.L. Ford

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Beautiful! I absolutely loved this! Slice of life pieces are so much fun. Describing a single moment that has so much depth in it.

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Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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Gorgeous description!

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Thank you kindly!

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"Her skin was dazzling gold and as she breathed in, her fingerprints began to deepen" - Such an incredible descriptive detail. I've never in my life imagined a fingerprint "breathing", and yet I was able to picture this perfectly, almost like gills shifting on a fish. Great slice of Astra life.

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So glad you enjoyed it! It's a weird thing to picture, but picturing the strange can be so fun! I mean, we're picturing a glowing yellow person as is, why not add some more oddities to the fishing trip?

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