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Michael B. Morgan's avatar

Great piece, girl. Nice atmosphere, accurate and deep without too much detail. I like that.

L.L. Ford's avatar

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

(Just so you're aware, I am not a girl - he/him/boy/guy/whatever you get the idea - no trouble or hard feelings at all, just wanted to make sure not to confuse you!)

Michael B. Morgan's avatar

This is where my wife would say, "Mik, ya're always the same..." Sorry! My mistake. Thanks for letting me know! :-)

Caitriana NicNeacail's avatar

This is SO GOOD, I love it! I love how you’ve used the real-life rat research and ultrasonic vocalizations, and the ramping tension and sense of panic Taye experiences is excellently done!

L.L. Ford's avatar

I'm so glad you liked it! I was walking home one day and it just hit me and I knew I had the perfect story for it! Thank you for making this fantastic sandbox!