Waited impatiently all week for this. Boy was it worth the wait. This story strikes a grand balance of science-fiction, coming-of-age, and mystery. Also that ending came out of nowhere; a great bit of surreal action. My favorite line from this part: "How can a two dimensional object on a three dimensional plane point to things on other planes…?"
I'm so glad you liked that line! I'll admit I was worried it would land weird but I took what felt like a risk keeping it in because it just felt right to me.
Here's to hoping part 3 lives up to the rest! Thanks for reading!
Wow. I was not expecting that turn at the end! Looking forward to seeing how it wraps up in Part 3!
Waited impatiently all week for this. Boy was it worth the wait. This story strikes a grand balance of science-fiction, coming-of-age, and mystery. Also that ending came out of nowhere; a great bit of surreal action. My favorite line from this part: "How can a two dimensional object on a three dimensional plane point to things on other planes…?"
Part 3 cannot come soon enough.
I'm so glad you liked that line! I'll admit I was worried it would land weird but I took what felt like a risk keeping it in because it just felt right to me.
Here's to hoping part 3 lives up to the rest! Thanks for reading!