LOVED this. Great spooky-but-somehow-still-cosy small town vibe, and Henrietta seems like a fun and feisty character! Very different feel to Astra and you’ve pulled it off superbly. Looking forward to seeing how it develops!
It's cool that you can shift styles so readily between Astra and the more supernatural-mystery tone here. Similar style to S. E. Reid's Fishmaids (I say as a compliment). You do a good job of painting the town especially; I can hear the Twin Peaks music playing through the whole read. Looking forward to more - great stuff L. L.
LOVED this. Great spooky-but-somehow-still-cosy small town vibe, and Henrietta seems like a fun and feisty character! Very different feel to Astra and you’ve pulled it off superbly. Looking forward to seeing how it develops!
Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it, I can't wait to share more parts of this as I choose to!
It's cool that you can shift styles so readily between Astra and the more supernatural-mystery tone here. Similar style to S. E. Reid's Fishmaids (I say as a compliment). You do a good job of painting the town especially; I can hear the Twin Peaks music playing through the whole read. Looking forward to more - great stuff L. L.
Thank you so much, Sam! That's high praise and I really appreciate it!
This was a fun read. I'm already stressed.
Thank you! I'm looking forward to putting this one out in between things! I'm glad you enjoyed so far!