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That description of the rifle shot like a streak of gold, passing through the glowing storm, turning sand to glass - brilliantly cinematic.

Also, its a treat to see Akashi's development from Children of War. I'm that much more invested in him.

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He's definitely one of my favorite characters - I'm glad you're enjoying more of his story! Also gosh I was really proud of that line so I'm glad it stuck out for you too. Thanks for reading as always!

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I’m a couple months late, but I’m driving into The Southern Calt! If part one is any indication, this is going to be epic.

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Thank you so much for tuning in. Late or not I hope you enjoy it!

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Jun 5Liked by L.L. Ford

Damn, this is exciting. Very lush imagery and a confident sense of the world and characters. I found myself locked in before I knew it. Excited to get deeper into the Calt!

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Evocative and pulled me in. Well done! Looking forward to the next part.

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So glad you enjoyed! Thank you for reading!

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Apr 6Liked by L.L. Ford

I didn't read the other stories, so I'm just kinda sad right now. Like, congrats guys, you've destroyed your whole world.

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Apr 5Liked by L.L. Ford

Oh my gosh I've got SHIVERS from the concept of the bomb (?) as the dead soldier

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Yeah at some points in history Astra is a bit of a mess, but lucky for them, it never quite stays that way! I hope you enjoyed even with a bit of sadness

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I've been really behind on reading this week, so only just got to this! Another great story. Poor Akashi.. I wonder if his path and Ollen's will ever cross again?

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