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Anderson II's avatar

So intense! I'm hooked!

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L.L. Ford's avatar

I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far! Thanks so much for giving it a look!

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Elias King's avatar

I like long stories. And feel free to add as much dimension as you want.

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L.L. Ford's avatar

Thank you, I appreciate your thoughts on the matter!

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Caitriana NicNeacail's avatar

What a cliffhanger! Great buildup of tension in the tunnels.. What is Commander Saquoa up to?? Looking forward to the next part!!

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L.L. Ford's avatar

I can't wait for you to see the next part! Thank you for reading as always!

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Cole Batson's avatar

Great pacing (ha). I’m really enjoying this story so far. I especially like the blend of fantasy and sci-fi

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L.L. Ford's avatar

Hey, thanks! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! And a fantastic pun, beautifully placed

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L.L. Ford's avatar

Thanks so much for the feedback! I appreciate it! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Let's keep the ball rolling!

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