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Caitriana NicNeacail's avatar

The description of Last Night was really moving. I hope Akashi gets to meet up with Aunty Gee again at the end so she can give him a stiff-upper-lipped nod of approval and maybe even a hug!

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L.L. Ford's avatar

That was one of my favorite sections so far! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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Ken W.'s avatar

The parts about Akashi going off to war are definitely the most powerful. Inevitable misery and probable death.

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L.L. Ford's avatar

It feels weird to say I'm glad you're picking up on that, but, well, I am! I hope you're enjoying misery and probable death nonetheless!

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L.L. Ford's avatar

Thanks for keeping on eye out! I'll admit I was so tired editing, I got to a point where my brain was going "its probably fine... probably."

But yes that scene was a ton of fun, wasn't it! Thanks so much for following along with this story!

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